Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Jun 17, 2015 20:13
8 yrs ago
русский term
США
Quality translations at reasonable rates
Native in: английский 
Works in: русский => английский, болгарский => английский
громадье
русский => английский
Искусство/Литература
Литература и поэзия
Lines from a Mayakovsky poem
…Я планов наших люблю громадье,
Размаха шаги саженьи…
I'm at a loss here…
Размаха шаги саженьи…
I'm at a loss here…
Proposed translations
(английский)
| 4 | vastness |
Victoria Batarchuk
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| 4 +4 | immensity |
Evgeny Artemov (X)
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| 4 | see |
Michael Korovkin
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Proposed translations
21 мин
Victoria Batarchuk
Украина
Украина
Native in русский
Украина
Experienced technical/legal translator
Native in: русский 
, украинский
Works in: английский => русский, английский => украинский, русский => английский, and 3 more.
Related KudoZ points
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8
Selected
vastness
... of our plans :)
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Thanks... but why me? I'm in a puzzle...
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Note added at 3 days1 hr (2015-06-20 21:13:24 GMT) Post-grading
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Thanks... but why me? I'm in a puzzle...
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
+4
10 мин
immensity
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Note added at 14 mins (2015-06-17 20:27:12 GMT)
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Or 'giganitsm', 'tremendousness' -- if you want the meaning.
I think that poem has been translated at least one.
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Note added at 14 mins (2015-06-17 20:27:27 GMT)
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*once
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Note added at 14 mins (2015-06-17 20:27:12 GMT)
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Or 'giganitsm', 'tremendousness' -- if you want the meaning.
I think that poem has been translated at least one.
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Note added at 14 mins (2015-06-17 20:27:27 GMT)
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*once
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Angela Greenfield
7 мин
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Thanks.
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| agree |
Mark Berelekhis
: immensity is good
25 мин
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Thanks.
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| agree |
Zamira B.
8 час
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| agree |
Oleksiy Markunin
15 час
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2 дн 19 час
Michael Korovkin
Италия
Италия
Native in русский
&
английский
Specializes in field
Италия
Native in: английский , русский
Works in: русский => английский, английский => русский, итальянский => русский, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
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174
see
It's poetry: you don't have to stick "technically" close to text.
Re-phrase as something like
I love our projects' giant sweep
the giant stride(s) we've set to keep
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Note added at 3 days11 hrs (2015-06-21 07:15:21 GMT) Post-grading
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Duh it is, and even Yuck!
But if you think it's much better in Russian, well, may VM forgive me, t'ain't.
Gromad'e sounds rough, preposterous and mildly bad-taste/vulgar (like many M's neologisms). Sazhen'i – wrong stress, and also rough... I guess it works: pile rough upon rough upon rough, and people would say the guy've got balls. But, really, taste-wise, duh it is... T'ain't Mandelshtam for sure...
Re-phrase as something like
I love our projects' giant sweep
the giant stride(s) we've set to keep
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Note added at 3 days11 hrs (2015-06-21 07:15:21 GMT) Post-grading
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Duh it is, and even Yuck!
But if you think it's much better in Russian, well, may VM forgive me, t'ain't.
Gromad'e sounds rough, preposterous and mildly bad-taste/vulgar (like many M's neologisms). Sazhen'i – wrong stress, and also rough... I guess it works: pile rough upon rough upon rough, and people would say the guy've got balls. But, really, taste-wise, duh it is... T'ain't Mandelshtam for sure...
Note from asker:
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