May 29, 2006 11:36
18 yrs ago
русский term
отклонять
русский => английский
Бизнес/Финансы
Бизнес / Коммерция (в целом)
тут лучше decline or reject?
3.4. Заказчик в течение 7 (семи) дней согласовывает График работ и Смету затрат или отклоняет их с указанием причин.
3.5. В случае согласования Графика работ и Сметы затрат Подрядчик приступает к работам.
3.6. В случае, если График работ и/или Смета затрат отклонены, Подрядчик в течение 7 (семи) дней готовит новые График работ и/или Смету затрат на согласование Заказчиком.
3.4. The Customer shall approve or decline with specification of reasons the Work schedule and the Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days.
3.5. The Contractor commences works upon approval of the Work schedule and the Cost estimate.
3.6. If the Work schedule and/or the Cost estimate are declined, the Contractor shall prepare new Work schedule and Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days for approval by the Customer.
нет ли ошибок, бросающихся в глаза?
3.4. Заказчик в течение 7 (семи) дней согласовывает График работ и Смету затрат или отклоняет их с указанием причин.
3.5. В случае согласования Графика работ и Сметы затрат Подрядчик приступает к работам.
3.6. В случае, если График работ и/или Смета затрат отклонены, Подрядчик в течение 7 (семи) дней готовит новые График работ и/или Смету затрат на согласование Заказчиком.
3.4. The Customer shall approve or decline with specification of reasons the Work schedule and the Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days.
3.5. The Contractor commences works upon approval of the Work schedule and the Cost estimate.
3.6. If the Work schedule and/or the Cost estimate are declined, the Contractor shall prepare new Work schedule and Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days for approval by the Customer.
нет ли ошибок, бросающихся в глаза?
Proposed translations
(английский)
Proposed translations
+5
9 мин
Selected
decline/refuse/reject
...shall approve or reject specifying the grounds for rejection (reasons)...
3.6. If the Work schedule and/or the Cost estimate are declined, the Contractor shall prepare _a_ new Work schedule and Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days for approval by the Customer.
3.6. If the Work schedule and/or the Cost estimate are declined, the Contractor shall prepare _a_ new Work schedule and Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days for approval by the Customer.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
+2
3 мин
Konstantin Kisin
Великобритания
Великобритания
Native in русский
&
английский
Specializes in field
Великобритания
Bilingual Finance, Law & Business Pro
Native in: английский 
, русский
Works in: русский => английский, английский, английский => русский
Related KudoZ points
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124
rejects/refuses to accept
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Peer comment(s):
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Olga Cartlidge
: Refuses to accept is a good idea.
35 мин
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| agree |
Irina Kondratieva
18 час
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5 мин
Simon Hollingsworth
Великобритания
Великобритания
Native in английский
Specializes in field
Великобритания
Professional translator since 1991
Native in: английский 
Works in: русский => английский
Related KudoZ points
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16
decline
Ijust think that 'reject' is a little more confrontational.
+3
8 мин
Jack Doughty
Великобритания
Великобритания
Native in английский
Великобритания
Translator since 1953
Native in: английский
Works in: русский => английский, немецкий => английский, английский
Related KudoZ points
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423
decline or reject
Either would be OK, "decline" possibly sounds a shade more polite than "reject", but there isn't much in it.
The only slight amendment I would suggest to your version is:
3.4. ... or decline, specifying reasons, the Work schedule...
The only slight amendment I would suggest to your version is:
3.4. ... or decline, specifying reasons, the Work schedule...
Peer comment(s):
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Margarita
1 мин
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Thank you.
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Сергей Лузан
1 час
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Thank you.
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Sergei Tumanov
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Thank you.
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+1
13 мин
I like 'decline' for 3.4 and "not accepted" in 3.6
I guess this is fairly subjective on my part, but I would use 'decline' in clause 3.4 and 'if X and Y are not accepted...' in clause 3.5.
I seem to feel like 'decline' is a little 'too nice' for work that is being sent back for amendments and/or redoing.
I seem to feel like 'decline' is a little 'too nice' for work that is being sent back for amendments and/or redoing.
+1
5 мин
David Knowles
Native in английский
Works in field
Specialist in Civil Law & Contracts
Native in: английский
Works in: русский => английский, английский, украинский => английский
Related KudoZ points
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199
reject
3.4. The Customer shall approve or reject (giving reasons) the Work schedule and the Cost estimate within 7 (seven) days.
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Note added at 15 mins (2006-05-29 11:52:07 GMT)
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I don't like "approve", and would put "accept". "accept or reject" is then a standard phrase.
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Note added at 15 mins (2006-05-29 11:52:07 GMT)
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I don't like "approve", and would put "accept". "accept or reject" is then a standard phrase.
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