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The Sorrow of the Sun-Stealer by Felister Mukosi

Before the first dawn split the horizon, the world slept under a heavy shroud of endless twilight. In those early ages, fire was not a gift of the earth, but a stolen ember from the crown of Sol-Vael, the golden dragon who coiled around the highest peak of the Obsidian Ridge. His scales blazed with the fury of a thousand stars, and his breath gave life to the primordial rivers.

It was Kaelen, a mortal hunter born in the shadows, who dared to climb the jagged peak. Armed only with a cloak woven from midnight mist and a heart hardened by bitter cold, Kaelen crept into the dragon’s lair while the beast slumbered. With trembling hands, he plunged an iron vessel into the dragon’s heart-fire, trapping a burning spark within the dark metal.

Yet the theft did not go unnoticed. As Kaelen fled down the steep precipice, Sol-Vael awoke. A roar of shattered thunder echoed across the valleys, shaking the foundations of the world. Rather than unleashing destructive flame upon the mortal thief, the dragon wept. His tears, hot as molten bronze, cascaded down the mountain slopes, carving deep gorges that would later become the great salt seas.

"You have taken the warmth that kept the void at bay," the dragon’s voice boomed, echoing in Kaelen’s mind. "Guard it well, little thief, for fire demands a price that shadow never claimed."

Kaelen brought the ember back to his people, and for the first time, warmth bloomed in the frozen valleys. Villages arose where icy shadows once reigned, and civilization flickered into life under the sky. But every night, as the fires burned low, the villagers heard a low, mournful song blowing over the mountains—a dragon grieving not for his lost power, but for the peaceful silence of a world that had now learned how to burn.
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