Glossary entry (derived from question below)
русский term or phrase:
предъявляемые требования
английский translation:
regulatory requirements
русский term
Specialist in Civil Law & Contracts
Native in: английский 
Works in: русский => английский, английский, украинский => английский
о соответствии заключения экспертизы безопасности предъявляемым требованиям
Here's my attempt, which is still very heavy: As a result of this review we have taken a decision on the conformity of the expert industrial safety opinion with the requirements and have confirmed it.
What have I missed, and what can I simplify? I'm a bit puzzled by предъявляемым требованиям.
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Sep 13, 2007 07:54: David Knowles Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
США
Translating Power
Native in: русский
Works in: английский => украинский, украинский => английский
see below
It sounds like a meeting report, so there was a discussion (рассмотрение = обсуждение), the grammar of the sentence insists that it was the paper that was complying with the certain requirements, however with Russian gobbledegook you can never be sure the author him/herself understands what he/she is trying to say.
submit a written report that conforms to the guidelines
Study Reports will comply with the ICH, FDA and EMEA regulatory requirements
http://www.drugdevelopment-technology.com/contractors/contract_research/neurofit/press5.html
Украина
careful, caring, and perfectionist
Native in: русский 
, украинский
Works in: английский => русский, русский => английский, украинский => английский, and 1 more.
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confirmed that ... is compliant with
США
Exemplary quality, truly bilingual
Native in: русский , английский
Works in: русский => английский, английский => русский, английский
below
This is as much as I dare to change it. The Russian is extremely awkward, and I'm vary of inadvertently changing the meaning while making the English readable.
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Okay, let's try this then:
... we have decided and confirmed that the expert opinion regarding industrial safety conditions meets/satisfies the required demands.
I think that it's actually a bit better than my 1st attempt. Besides for 'заключение экспертизы промышленной безопасности' staying together.
| I'm glad you agree that the Russian is extremely awkward! It looks like a standard paragraph, so it ought to be comprehensible. |
| заключение экспертизы промышленной безопасности has to stay together, because it occurs elsewhere. |
Россия
Precision Powered by Knowledge
Native in: русский
Works in: английский => русский, русский => английский
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As a result of this review the meeting (Comission, etc. whatever fits in) decided that the Conclusion of Industrial Safety Expertise/Inspection conforms with the established requirements (i.e. Norms&Standards) and voted to approve it
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